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Unspoken Love

Under layers of sheets against the biting coldness of early mist in between soft, cuddly comfort of my pillows and an unseen blanket of warmth all over me An unnamed waves suddenly washed me and swept me to the unknown abyss of darkness unknown abyss of lost hopes, dreams and wishes. My hands are flailing, searching for something to hold on to hoping for never-ending hope that I will be swept back ashore for I'm losing, drowning and on the verge of giving up soon.. anytime! Like any other dreams that I dream't before Is it worth dreaming for? Or should I wait a little more? Would it be a dream come true someday? anytime? I heard a thumping, so loud it brought me back to where I ended up last night cushioned in the familiar scent of my bed, I'm awake now; deaf in my own heartbeat, waiting for the sun to cast his light, soon, anytime! Mind racing in a speed of light, in a morning Sunday rush! whilst heart is taking it's pace in a leisure Sunday morning walk distance covered, places conquered, end of the line will be reached anytime soon. And from where the sun rises, a secret wish was blown into a kiss all the way up, up against the course of hands of time may the faith favor the odds and let that wish be granted... anytime soon!

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Date: 3/21/2016 10:38:00 PM
Ma. Fatima Ferrer, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/16/2013 12:11:00 PM
Forgive me for any suggestions. You can delete my note: but what if instead of "in between soft, cuddly comfort of my pillows" you had penned "in between soft, cuddly comfort of my covers"?
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Date: 12/3/2013 6:45:00 PM
Sometimes a little ritual will help have calmer sleep, like when we were small a bedtime prayer? A cd of delta waves? A meditation cd. Anyway I know the feeling! Those things help me ;) Light & Love
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