Unspoken

Her heart hurts since Penzance An oft meeting now 'à outrance' Reckless romance recants Forbidden faith’s life dance Sparked suddenly from slight glance

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2011 12:04:00 AM

oooh, love that last line there, jeff. well, to thank people for comments you just do what you already showed me you can do. Click on their name and tell them so, right here in the box beneath one of their poems. I thank you for YOUR comment. I trust you figured out how to enter this contest then? And do you know how to click on that little soup bowl on a person's name to send them soupmail? that one took ME a while to figure out. Luv, andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/19/2011 5:33:00 PM

Nice rhyming poem. enjoyed it jeff

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2011 4:44:00 PM

Very creative work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara