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Below is the poem entitled Unseen which was written by poet Amy Green. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Ah! But to be unnoticed
But to be in the shadows of 
life's living day by day

To be the veiled spectator
of a father cutting grass and
a child in the sandbox-

To witness these normal things
normal people do on a normal day
is pure ecstasy to one who
glides past all like an unseen

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  1. Date: 9/22/2012 12:33:00 PM
    the great mystery of the self, passing in watching, alluded in 3 stanzas, well done!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 6:01:00 PM
    Sometimes it can be a true joy just to watch. WHERE and HOW are you? Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/3/2012 6:10:00 AM
    an in depth view Awesome Amy of the inner self.. to be unsewen.. a fly on the wall..a face in the crowd.. introspecxtive write my friend.. how have u been luv?

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 12:27:00 AM
    Its written so well.Unseen like the wind,Beautiful

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 7:50:00 PM
    A lonely sounding poem. Also a prayer to be noticed by one who is shy. Thanks for sharing.