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Unrequited love

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Unrequited love

You are not the man that I once knew
There is something different about you
The sparkle in your eyes is strange
Your style, your walk, your look changed

You used to smile when you came near
And whisper sweet things in my ear
We could not bear to be apart.
Now someone else has gotten your heart

I want you still, I can’t deny
I long for you, when you pass by
But something is different about you
You are not the man that I once knew.

July 27, 2014
Form : Rhyme
Dr. Ram Mehta
9th Place win
Contest: Relationships by Regina Riddle

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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 1:20:00 PM
    Congratulations Dr Ram...Linda

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 7:39:00 PM
    Big congrats on your fine win!!!!

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 9:54:00 AM
    Hi Dr. Ram, huge congratulations on your fine well-deserved win. I particularly enjoyed reading this amazing piece. Pandita

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 7:57:00 AM
    the man seems to have moved on while you still long for his company. happens so many times. nicely put in rhyme. congrats for the win, Dr. Ram. Mohan

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 7:18:00 AM
    Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on your fine win. I enjoyed this piece. Kika

  1. Date: 7/28/2014 5:09:00 AM
    People change and the perceptions too. Many congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 10:28:00 AM
    I almost feel you could be writing about soup here,,, love this....

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 6:58:00 AM
    Interesting and yet sad tale of a reality lived out for so many Dr. Ram!

  1. Date: 7/27/2014 4:29:00 AM
    - Sad, when it happens .... the feeling of happiness is gone - Good luck in the contest, Dr. Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)