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Unrequited Love

You are not the man that I once knew There is something different about you The sparkle in your eyes is strange Your style, your walk, your look changed You used to smile when you came near And whisper sweet things in my ear We could not bear to be apart. Now someone else has gotten your heart I want you still, I can’t deny I long for you, when you pass by But something is different about you You are not the man that I once knew. +++++++ July 27, 2014 Form : Rhyme Dr. Ram Mehta 9th Place win Contest: Relationships by Regina Riddle

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Date: 7/29/2014 1:20:00 PM
Congratulations Dr Ram...Linda
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:39:00 PM
Big congrats on your fine win!!!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:54:00 AM
Hi Dr. Ram, huge congratulations on your fine well-deserved win. I particularly enjoyed reading this amazing piece. Pandita
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:57:00 AM
the man seems to have moved on while you still long for his company. happens so many times. nicely put in rhyme. congrats for the win, Dr. Ram. Mohan
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:18:00 AM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on your fine win. I enjoyed this piece. Kika
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Date: 7/28/2014 5:09:00 AM
People change and the perceptions too. Many congratulations on the win.
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Date: 7/27/2014 10:28:00 AM
I almost feel you could be writing about soup here,,, love this....
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Date: 7/27/2014 4:29:00 AM
- Sad, when it happens .... the feeling of happiness is gone - Good luck in the contest, Dr. Ram ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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