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Unrequited

All the while you've been here, There's been someone who was there, To listen with bated breath, and hang on to each word of yours, you might not have noticed but somebody cared of course. Content to listen to whatever you might have to say, Cherishing each and every word that came her way. On her every heartbeat your name was etched, but happiness was not destined for the poor wretch. She wanted you with every shard of her being, Without you, existence for her had no meaning. But before she could fly fate chopped her wings, And left her a shattered mess, the poor thing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/31/2015 9:45:00 PM
AS, enjoyed reading your tonight. Hope to see you active this coming year. Goodbye, 2015 --- Hello 2016. God Bless. SKAT
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Date: 7/8/2011 11:55:00 PM
Nice! I really liked it, hope you enjoy the site! all the best, keep writing.
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Date: 7/7/2011 5:31:00 PM
A melting pot of emotions. I love this poem. More Please
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Date: 7/6/2011 11:54:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Akanksha. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2011 11:33:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoy the site and its many features as u continue to share words with luv.. excellent poetry...
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