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Below is the poem entitled Unreal which was written by poet Carmen Castro. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Tears on my face pouring down like the rain 
A past that always haunts me like a stubborn stain 
Heart tore to pieces in so much pain 
Lips on my face that  no longer smile 
Laughter in my soul not heard in a while 
Spirit so beaten it refuses to stand 
Future so far I can't grasp in my hand 
Things happen in life I  don't comprehend 
I wish I could write nice sappy poems 
Of love and the future, and a house that's a home 
Tired of replaying this same sad song 
Not being so weak and standing up strong 
 Then I would be writing of things I don't feel 
Then this poem would be something that to me is not real

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  1. Date: 6/1/2012 9:52:00 PM
    WOW! i felt every word! Keep writing!!!!

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro
    Date: 6/2/2012 12:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks : )
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 2:21:00 PM
    I can feel your desire for happiness in your poem. If writing makes you feel the least bit better, I encourage you to continue writing.

    Castro Avatar Carmen Castro
    Date: 6/1/2012 2:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very true indeed : )