Unicorn For Your Birthday

In the dark, mysteriously gloomy night There floats a very damp and destructive fog In this disturbing sight is a mighty light A figure appears directly on a log She has a beautiful horn on her head There’s nothing bad about her that can be said She can fly and grant wishes for a birthday Heard yours has come, unicorn’s here for your day
Russell Sivey This poem is dedicated to my good friend PD for her glorious Birthday! I don't know how old she is but I'm sure she will tell us all exactly her age soon, ha ha! Nevertheless I hope you have a fantastic birthday on Oct 7th my friend, this poem is just for you!! En!trant Into Poet ~ Destroyer's "Poet ~ Destroyer" contest 9/29/2012
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Date: 10/6/2012 12:17:00 AM
Many congrats Russell for this wonderful win.
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:27:00 PM
A delightful poetic treat for PD. Congratulations on winning 1st place Russel. Cynthia
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Date: 10/5/2012 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in P.D.'s "Unicorn" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations for a wonderfully written poem..It’s really a lovely write…Cheers!!!
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations Russell that girl sure loves her unicorns xx
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:56:00 AM
Congrats on this lovely poem dedicated to the birthday girl PD. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/5/2012 8:52:00 AM
there you go, russel.. big clappies to you for the big win!..) huggs!
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:58:00 AM
great idea for an entry, Russell!...Love the scene u set for this write..the mysterious aura of a fog...makes me think of the Willie Wonka kid...but I want an Umpaloompa, and I want it NOW!!! hhaahahah...happy autumn, friend!
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Date: 10/5/2012 7:19:00 AM
Russell. Congratulations, with my Unicorn Birthday Poem... Ain't I just a greedy one..LOL.. love always~ The Poet Sweet Destroyer ~
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Date: 10/1/2012 4:35:00 PM
great poem for her and the dedication as well, Russell. wish I had time to see more of your poems. I caught up on three days of not doing comments and now I need to get home from work!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2012 10:10:00 PM
Russell, if you knew how old i was you would not believe me. LOL. oh yes! Thank you so much, and a super shame on me for the early peek. Yes, i was that kid peeking at every x-mass present under the tree... always~ PD
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Date: 9/29/2012 3:00:00 PM
a heartfelt and uplifting cheers for PD, russell.. glad to read you using other forms; great presentation and skillfully crafted .. winning huggs!..:)
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Date: 9/29/2012 1:17:00 PM
lovely write for PD, my friend
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Date: 9/29/2012 11:07:00 AM
Me too... I add my Birthday wishes to PD! Have a super duper celebration! Yee haw! Well done Russell! Cheers, Jack
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