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Unflinchingly

I told her I didn't care, eyes open wide with innocence, seeping hatred through the cracks in my retina. I felt her draw her yellow-parchment skin over me, like a web of history and headlines - years and years of forgotten words burning themselves into my memory for the second time, only dirtier. I smiled as she took over my gag-reflex, swimming over the muscles along my spine, tantalizing all my knuckles, crackling at the tips of my hair. I dreamed I sank my teeth into her and snapped the bird-bones at the hollow of her throat and blew the sand that was her marrow into a desert of insignificance. I stood in the sky and watched as I turned my face. I watched my pupils fill up with tar and I watched her blood run down my chin. and I didn't even flinch. ** Written to describe one of the seven deadly sins... wrath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/27/2009 4:33:00 PM
Good description here. We have all felt this at one time or another. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2009 5:58:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Micaela. Wishing you a great week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2009 10:48:00 PM
You always describe things amazingly. Seriously, your descriptions always are mindblowing. You may well be the queen of metaphor! "Through the cracks in my retina" I just adore that mixed image, hideous and yet beautiful. Also omg at the juxtaposition in "bird-bones". Honest to god there's a reason you write...because you're damn good at it! You = legend. Love ya Daffseh. Bugsy :D
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Date: 10/24/2009 9:14:00 PM
I can dig it.
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