Unflinchingly

I told her I didn't care,
eyes open wide with innocence,
seeping hatred 
through the cracks in my retina.

I felt her draw her yellow-parchment
skin over me, like a web 
of history and headlines -
years and years of forgotten words
burning themselves into my memory
for the second time, only
dirtier.

I smiled as she took over my 
gag-reflex, swimming
over the muscles along my spine,
tantalizing all my knuckles,
crackling at the tips of my hair.

I dreamed I sank my teeth into her
and snapped the bird-bones at the 
hollow of her throat
and blew the sand that was her marrow 
into a desert of insignificance.

I stood in the sky
and watched as I turned my face.
I watched my pupils fill up with tar
and I watched
her blood run down
my chin.

and I didn't

    even

      flinch.


** Written to describe one of the seven deadly sins... wrath
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/27/2009 4:33:00 PM
Good description here. We have all felt this at one time or another. Keep writing. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/26/2009 5:58:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Micaela. Wishing you a great week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2009 10:48:00 PM
You always describe things amazingly. Seriously, your descriptions always are mindblowing. You may well be the queen of metaphor! "Through the cracks in my retina" I just adore that mixed image, hideous and yet beautiful. Also omg at the juxtaposition in "bird-bones". Honest to god there's a reason you write...because you're damn good at it! You = legend. Love ya Daffseh. Bugsy :D
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2009 9:14:00 PM
I can dig it.
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter