Unfinished

(for all poets who cannot stop revising)

I am not finished
I am never finished
In the poet’s head
I am kneaded indefinitely

I am not finished
often typed
put in writing
spread imaginary
I am always one step
ahead of the poet

I am never finished
forever young
because the poet
smooths my wrinkles
forever and ever

But am I finished
when the poet is finished?
Or do I get a legal guardian 
and an unwrinkled future?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Ha, love it
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2011 at 7:17 AM
I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day Niels. Love, Carol
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July 6, 2011 at 7:01 AM
funny....i like the creativity in this poem....original idea.
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