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Undetectable Lights

I've been homeless and I've owned homes Each time in love with the girl of my dreams I've walked down some lonely streets alone Been let down by love twice over it seems Life's mysterious riddles of reds and greens

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Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/18/2010 4:58:00 PM

if you've been without a house, and lived through it. you must have a great wisdom(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2010 5:59:00 PM

ok, I am going to track down that poem to reread it. Oh, was it way way back on another page? That must be why I can't find the Foolproof poem??(my memory is way too short. hahaha)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2010 5:35:00 PM

MItch, I didn't know what your message to me was talking about. The poem you told me, I don't know who wrote it and I can't find it here under your poems. Anyway, I think many people are saying many things here recently. I know some of what I am saying myself has definitley been taken out of context! LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2010 11:23:00 PM

I liked how you related this to the street lights, Mitch. Maybe you are color blind? haha. (just kidding) Luv, Andrea