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Under the Weather

I know you are trying to keep it together. For a little while, you've been under the weather. It is no fun spending every day in bed. Anybody would like to be up and about instead. In just a few days, what you take will clear your head. Don't worry. You'll live. You won't be dead. Inspired by another member's poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/28/2012 12:44:00 PM
Out of bed ..... it's a new day ..... use it my friend. Well written Robert. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2012 6:31:00 PM
i like the short sentences at the end. well done!
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Date: 9/27/2012 6:23:00 PM
VERY cute. makes me wonder whose poem you read to inspire this. (good one for a greeting card too)
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Date: 9/27/2012 10:34:00 AM
interesting how you wrote this, dealing with a very negitive, situation.. yet the poem brings the subject to life, and tells it how it is... like this alot Robert...
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Date: 9/27/2012 7:26:00 AM
OK Robert - who is under the weather? Is it anyone that is a little sick. I know how it feels. I was in the hospital for 4 months and I didn't die. I'm here T. T. G. Have a great day. Lucilla
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