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Under the Same Umbrella

rain brings us
under the same umbrella---
quarrelling


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By:kash poet

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Timothy Hicks

March 24, 2013 at 10:23 AM

This was a very clever piece and a funny thought. It actually feels similar to my "snowy evening" haiku that you recently read... only in reverse where the forces of nature bring two people to battle things out... instead of finding the things that make you the same... only have read a couple so far but you seem to really understand what makes haiku great.

Carrie Richards

January 5, 2013 at 9:37 AM

Somehow I missed this one........wow, loved the twist !! Another side of romance, :( but yes.......it happens and you caught it nicely!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 3, 2012 at 1:16 PM

Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Kash. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

November 29, 2012 at 6:04 PM

Kashinath, are you ok? have not heard from you lately. Anyway, seeing this gem of yours on PD's winner list. Congratulations!!

Tim Ryerson

November 27, 2012 at 3:27 PM

So stop quarrelling and kiss her Kash! (before it stops raining!)...unique take on the subject for sure...congratulations - Tim

Gwendolen Song

November 27, 2012 at 3:02 PM

Wow...this is the first argument I have read in any of your poems...perhaps part 2 will have a romantic make up moment??...hahaha...Always a treat to read your creations....gwendolen

Len Gasun

November 27, 2012 at 9:09 AM

Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Kash! love/hugs, Leonora

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 27, 2012 at 1:40 AM

Congratulations on your winning place Kash xx

Yanny Widjanarko

November 26, 2012 at 10:20 PM

Congrats Kash for your winning haiku, they are gorgeous! :D-Hug, Yanny

Poet Destroyer A

November 26, 2012 at 9:40 PM

Kash, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry

Cory Long

November 16, 2012 at 12:23 PM

Nice picture you paint.. I hate it when that happens take care cory

Nette Onclaud

November 16, 2012 at 10:08 AM

the weather brings out the best in you... fantastic 'ku!... come on over, kashi bud!..:) hugggs

Elizabeth Wesley

November 16, 2012 at 9:56 AM

Too close for comfort in other words. Probably for the best to have one each. A neat way to divvy up some space. Luv, Lizzie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 16, 2012 at 1:03 AM

been in that situation Kash luv ..concise view of emotion .. much luck .. great insight too ..wow

Vicky Tsiluma

November 15, 2012 at 10:46 PM

LOVely Kash! I like how the poem turns to the unexpected. Nice!

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2012 at 4:49 PM

Ahhhh, a different kind of poem on being under an umbrella. CLEVER. oh, and that was so neat about the poem of mine, Kash. I had no idea there was a top 100 list here. Are you on it? Let me go see. I got my pee poem on it too!!!

Richard Lamoureux

November 15, 2012 at 6:34 AM

I like this one, sometimes relationships are like that . Well done.

Ilene Bauer

November 14, 2012 at 6:39 PM

you got me on that one! very clever!

Russell Sivey

November 14, 2012 at 3:24 PM

Ha ha, oh Kashi, you bring humor to my life with this witty write! I was enamored by the intricate way you spun that poem around! What an elaborate and distinctive piece my friend! I loved this delightful poem, Great Work!!