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under the same umbrella

rain brings us
under the same umbrella---


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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 10:23:00 AM
    This was a very clever piece and a funny thought. It actually feels similar to my "snowy evening" haiku that you recently read... only in reverse where the forces of nature bring two people to battle things out... instead of finding the things that make you the same... only have read a couple so far but you seem to really understand what makes haiku great.

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Somehow I missed this, loved the twist !! Another side of romance, :( but happens and you caught it nicely!!

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:16:00 PM
    Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 6:04:00 PM
    Kashinath, are you ok? have not heard from you lately. Anyway, seeing this gem of yours on PD's winner list. Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:27:00 PM
    So stop quarrelling and kiss her Kash! (before it stops raining!)...unique take on the subject for sure...congratulations - Tim

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 3:02:00 PM
    Wow...this is the first argument I have read in any of your poems...perhaps part 2 will have a romantic make up moment??...hahaha...Always a treat to read your creations....gwendolen

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 9:09:00 AM
    Many congratulations on your win my dear friend, Kash! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 11/27/2012 1:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Kash xx

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 10:20:00 PM
    Congrats Kash for your winning haiku, they are gorgeous! :D-Hug, Yanny

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 9:40:00 PM
    Kash, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry

  1. Date: 11/22/2012 6:21:00 PM
    Another great haiku, Kash! The middle line is yelling at me: write a poem... : ) I think Im going to steal that image! Ruben

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 12:23:00 PM
    Nice picture you paint.. I hate it when that happens take care cory

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 10:08:00 AM
    the weather brings out the best in you... fantastic 'ku!... come on over, kashi bud!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 9:56:00 AM
    Too close for comfort in other words. Probably for the best to have one each. A neat way to divvy up some space. Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/16/2012 1:03:00 AM
    been in that situation Kash luv ..concise view of emotion .. much luck .. great insight too

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 10:46:00 PM
    LOVely Kash! I like how the poem turns to the unexpected. Nice!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 4:49:00 PM
    Ahhhh, a different kind of poem on being under an umbrella. CLEVER. oh, and that was so neat about the poem of mine, Kash. I had no idea there was a top 100 list here. Are you on it? Let me go see. I got my pee poem on it too!!!

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 6:34:00 AM
    I like this one, sometimes relationships are like that . Well done.

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 6:39:00 PM
    you got me on that one! very clever!

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:24:00 PM
    Ha ha, oh Kashi, you bring humor to my life with this witty write! I was enamored by the intricate way you spun that poem around! What an elaborate and distinctive piece my friend! I loved this delightful poem, Great Work!!