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Under Disbelief

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Under Disbelief

Under a rainbow lies darkness… Below the colors, spilled forgiveness… A bird in a box whose wings are silenced… Etched on a wall is pure defiance… Innocence invaded by fear and disbelief… A torn smile uncovers grief… Squinting eyes slowly close and sleep… As tears dry and darkness creeps…
inspired by the movie "The Raven"

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  1. Date: 10/6/2013 9:37:00 AM
    Michael... Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever *LINDA*

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 7:44:00 PM
    really nice poem,congrats on your poem being featured,Ivy

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 6:52:00 PM
    excellent poem, congrats on having your poem featured...haven't seen you around here, hope all is good...

  1. Date: 2/27/2013 12:44:00 PM
    Reading it here ... once again finding shivers !! Such a good write !!

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 12:22:00 PM
    You've captured the movie so vividly with your words, Michael! Awesome! Exceptional writing, my friend. Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Michael, a beauty, well done, constance

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 8:43:00 AM
    LIke Gail says this is a powerful image. I am trying to remember this movie. It seems there have been been more than one Raven movies. But of course, they would all be dark! I like this one, Michael. So nice to hear from you. BTW, you should go see that new movie, dark skies. Talk about dark!!!

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 8:08:00 AM
    Wow, you sure do know how to write a special write my friend! This is a masterful poem, quite an enlightening piece, Great Work!!