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Under Cat's Paw

Silent moth, lonely Spirit, your dark beauty screams Trapped under cat’s paw.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/10/2011 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week mike. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/7/2011 8:59:00 AM

My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Mike

Ashley Plotczyk

Date: 6/6/2011 2:43:00 PM

Clever. Nice work. :) Congrats on your feature.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/23/2010 3:29:00 AM

Perfect imagery, Mike. Keep up the good writes. They are uplifting during life's plights. Smiling, Dane Ann

Brian Strand

Date: 1/16/2010 8:33:00 AM

Welcome Mike look forward to reading more from your pen.Thank you for your welcome comments today .Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2010 2:23:00 PM

Oh, this is really quite good! Luv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/15/2010 1:44:00 PM

you made me feel sorry for a moth!! good job, that is not easy.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2010 12:43:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku that you have written here. I can see the playful cat but a moth that is struggling to be free. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem about Big Daddy. I enjoyed writing that one and sharing that experience with everyone here. Sara