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Under a Tree

Under a tree the leaves fall Around a dark blue the tree is tall Upon the tree the truth falls Into a dark lake beyond the darkness But the truth will rise and be strong When you see the light within the tree You will see the light is the way to go and Leave the dark path alone A poem from my 12 year old son

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Date: 2/14/2024 1:27:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 2:47:00 PM
Hemi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2011 1:11:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Hemi's Son. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol
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