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'Undefined'




they started things out
thinking they had it all under control
little did they know that
emotions change
into different shapes and forms

the control slipped through their fingers
disappeared just like that
all they were left with
 was a yearning
for more of something 
they couldn’t even define…

©130520121710

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  1. lane Avatar
    chris lane
    Date: 8/5/2012 5:23:00 PM
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    Lack of control is scary in any situation but sometimes it's also necessary. Great poem...Chris
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    harry horsman
    Date: 5/14/2012 5:23:00 AM
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    Only you Wilma, could defined the undefinable, here you've just that in this wonderful poem. hope you are ok, harry
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    S.Jagathsimhan Nair
    Date: 5/13/2012 9:59:00 PM
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    It is this yearning that keeps life moving. A wonderful write,..:) Jag
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    John Rhinem
    Date: 5/13/2012 7:41:00 PM
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    Smile ˜ "Yessss, I Myself Could Most Definitely Equate These Priceless Emotions Stirring, My Dear Beyound Beautiful, Beautiful Wilma * Unto Your Precious, Amazing & Beautiful Light * 'This Beauty Inside Of Your Beautiful Eyes * My Love, Forever;'" John!:) ˜
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    Carolyn Devonshire
    Date: 5/13/2012 5:01:00 PM
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    Wilma, I started my last relationship this way, but emotions do change. Only true love is constant and I love the way you describe the "yearning for more of something the couldn't even define." Briliant! Hope your book is selling -- good idea to use it as your icon too. I'm collaborating with two other poets on a collection and a publisher has accepted it. We are going through the fine print of the contract now. Love, Carolyn
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    David Williams
    Date: 5/13/2012 12:47:00 PM
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    Wilma this is poetry at it's best..David
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    Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 5/13/2012 10:50:00 AM
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    You are such a poetic thinker, Wilma. I love how you defined this thing that can't be defined! well, you are my last one to visit for this morning. TIme for church. I better not make myself late like last time. Luv, Andrea
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    Arild Andresen Ertsland
    Date: 5/13/2012 10:42:00 AM
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    CTC,emotions are a constant changing matter:) Cool definition my friend! Have a great Cape Town Sunday.Hugs,Arild
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    Anne Lise Andresen
    Date: 5/13/2012 10:42:00 AM
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    Wilma.....a poem that bleeds....well written.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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    KEITH PAPYRUS
    Date: 5/13/2012 9:16:00 AM
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    We're never in control. Nice write. This is the definition of undefined.
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    Catie Lindsey
    Date: 5/13/2012 9:13:00 AM
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    this is sad, yet the yearning comes through loud and clear. Enjoyed your poem, Wilma. hugs, catie :)