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Unbuttoning

There once was a time when you can say unbuttoning was part of the foreplay. Every single button was a step to reach to a place they call garden of peach. Unbuttoning each other was like an art in a game which still now has few expert. Now a days people do not have much time and they quickly want to reach their prime. With zippers there is a vast change in scene I think you are getting what I mean. In this game people have less time to play zippers help them in that without much delay. ===============000=============== Placement;5th, February 2013 Contest:Buttons Sponsor:Susan Burch

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Date: 9/25/2013 9:44:00 AM
wow, Kash just come across a gem here,, love it...
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Date: 4/22/2013 3:57:00 AM
Unbuttoning somehow seems more sensual but that the old fashioned me.Anyways those zips do come more handy they should use them in baby.clothes more often..for when they do pooh pooh it takes awhile unbuttoning lol..and leave the buttons for grownups :) Very original kash and am still smilin
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Date: 2/27/2013 5:14:00 AM
;) GO BACK TO THE BUTTON PHASE... ;) If you get what I mean! ;) Interesting write. Enjoyed reading it!
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:57:00 PM
Bold write. Love it. And sadly--it's true. But I'm for the unbuttoning, not the unzipping. lol :) Tanya
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:43:00 PM
Sexual way to go with the contest's theme..Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 2/7/2013 12:36:00 PM
I am laughing........this was such a funny twist to the contest......and isn't it the truth?!! No need for romance....just get on with it !! It's the way of the world! Great job, Kash!!
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Date: 2/7/2013 9:16:00 AM
Congrats Kash on your win. Cute! Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/6/2013 8:07:00 PM
Cngratulations on your win, Kash. Your take is not only unique but well written as well. I like your poem and would have placed it higher. Always, Annalise
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Date: 2/6/2013 5:54:00 PM
I loved this one, Kash, kind of surprised she did not like it even more than the place you got. Congrats, my friend, hope to see more of you around here.
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Date: 2/6/2013 4:27:00 PM
Kash, :-) Congratulations on your well deserved win... xox~pd
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Date: 2/6/2013 3:31:00 AM
Congratulations Kash , I love the way you have gone for unbuttoning xx
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Date: 2/6/2013 12:26:00 AM
0_0,...daring win Kash....enjoyed reading...
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Date: 2/6/2013 12:21:00 AM
wow, how did I ever miss this one, kash. It is a very creative approach to buttons and only YOU would have thought of doing it this way. I love it. And big congrats to you in the contest.
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Date: 2/5/2013 1:01:00 PM
So many great poems with the theme "Buttons" - everyday things - Each one with different ideas ..... many different "Buttons". - Congratulations on your winning poem,Kash! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/5/2013 8:03:00 AM
Opening buttons to get to the button,. Congrats, this was fun!
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Date: 2/4/2013 3:48:00 PM
nice one! i remember some wedding gowns with a huge row of buttons down the back and i always thought that must be frustrating to deal with on your wedding night!
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Date: 2/4/2013 3:13:00 PM
Cute !! Yep, I get it lol Enjoyed the read !!
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