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unborn

the unborn life, has thoughts to dream
would not, have yet learned how to scheme

would not have dreams of love nor hate
rainbows, seem to explain their state

as their liquid life, begins to abate
our past will speak to this unborn's fate

Why? How? What happened? Tears.
Maybe only seconds but, their dreams were here.

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  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:36:00 PM
    Tom , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD

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    Date: 1/1/2013 7:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Best wishes and blessings to you and yours in the coming year. peace, light and love
  1. Date: 10/16/2012 12:39:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Tom. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 12:05:00 PM
    Many congrats Tom on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 11:16:00 AM
    Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 9:01:00 AM
    Congratulations on your Win friend Tom..Cheers!!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 8:00:00 PM
    nicely done, congratulations on your win. lee

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 7:38:00 PM
    TOM, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:50:00 AM
    Congrats on your Victory! Short and truthful. The schemes may be taught! Power write!

  1. Date: 9/26/2012 8:13:00 AM
    your last 2 lines are powerful! the sadness really punches me in the gut. best wishes in the contest!