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Two Worlds Colliding

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/7/2012 6:54:00 AM

good one Jimbo!! Thanks for your comments....I am glad to know I encouraged you....I didn't realize it has been 3 years.....

Cindy Cayton

Date: 9/5/2012 8:33:00 PM

Nice senryu. Enjoyable evening read... Cindy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 2:31:00 PM

Got a chuckle when I read it again..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:46:00 PM

JAMES, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2012 6:31:00 PM

Love how you GOT the 3rd line to take the reader somewhere else so much in so few words. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2012 11:13:00 AM

Hey, CONGRATS to you on your win, and now I have to get ready for church!!!

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:32:00 AM

Jimbo congrats on your great win....David

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 11:38:00 AM

Great write, James! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/11/2012 9:16:00 AM

great write James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/10/2012 8:14:00 AM

Great work..Winner for sure if the contest hasn't been judged..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/9/2012 8:28:00 PM

GREAT reflective senryu, james. I especially like the twist on that first one.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/9/2012 9:42:00 AM

Good, well done for the contest James - hope you win....luck....luck !!! - oxox huggs Anne-Lise :))