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Two Worlds Colliding

Major breakdown
an emergency call
rushing to the plant

on my table
under the candle
an unfinished poem


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By:kash poet

Contest:Two Worlds Colliding

Sponsor:Russell Sivey

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2012

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Sara Kendrick Date: 8/18/2012 2:33:00 PM Great topic...Most can relate to this one in some way or another..((()))!!Congrats on your win..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2012 5:54:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2012 11:42:00 PM KASH, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD Login to Reply

Vicky Tsiluma Date: 8/15/2012 1:11:00 AM Love this Kash. Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/14/2012 7:45:00 PM yes, I remember really liking this one. Belated congrats, kash. Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 8/13/2012 7:30:00 AM Wow, I like! a tardy congrats. BG Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/12/2012 6:29:00 PM ah yes sanity? and insanity? health & illness? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/12/2012 2:31:00 AM Kash, congrats on your great win...I can see it now...David Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 8/11/2012 6:22:00 PM Wow!This is awesome.Great write, Kash. Congratulations on your superb win... Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/11/2012 11:37:00 AM Great contrast, Kash. I like it. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 8/10/2012 4:19:00 PM Love it!! Perfect contrast! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/9/2012 5:55:00 AM a celestial smash this is , kashi bud... the floods have subsided but we are not that safe yet... hope all's well with you... this piece will hit the headlines!..wow!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 8/9/2012 1:05:00 AM Kash, just excellent ....David Login to Reply

Kathleen Stevens Date: 8/8/2012 11:34:00 PM Kash, I really like this poem, your are a wonderful writer...thank you for sharing with the world!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/8/2012 9:44:00 PM Kash, find the thought epic. one can only hold so much before giving up... good luck in the contest..pd Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/8/2012 9:07:00 PM GOOD one, describing the poet's dilemma, trying to write poems despite all the many things he has to attend to. I love where you took the theme. Just posted a poem, there is no way I am staying long tonight!! haha. I did two hours in the afternoon and now I have so much to catch up on in my house. Anyway, I saw your poem posted right under mine. How cool!! Login to Reply