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Two Worlds Colliding

Major breakdown an emergency call rushing to the plant on my table under the candle an unfinished poem ******************* By:kash poet Contest:Two Worlds Colliding Sponsor:Russell Sivey

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 2:33:00 PM

Great topic...Most can relate to this one in some way or another..((()))!!Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:42:00 PM

KASH, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 8/15/2012 1:11:00 AM

Love this Kash. Congrats on your win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 7:45:00 PM

yes, I remember really liking this one. Belated congrats, kash.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/13/2012 7:30:00 AM

Wow, I like! a tardy congrats. BG

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2012 6:29:00 PM

ah yes sanity? and insanity? health & illness? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:31:00 AM

Kash, congrats on your great win...I can see it now...David

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/11/2012 6:22:00 PM

Wow!This is awesome.Great write, Kash. Congratulations on your superb win...

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 11:37:00 AM

Great contrast, Kash. I like it. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/10/2012 4:19:00 PM

Love it!! Perfect contrast!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/9/2012 5:55:00 AM

a celestial smash this is , kashi bud... the floods have subsided but we are not that safe yet... hope all's well with you... this piece will hit the headlines!..wow!..:) huggs!

David Williams

Date: 8/9/2012 1:05:00 AM

Kash, just excellent ....David

Kathleen Stevens

Date: 8/8/2012 11:34:00 PM

Kash, I really like this poem, your are a wonderful writer...thank you for sharing with the world!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2012 9:44:00 PM

Kash, find the thought epic. one can only hold so much before giving up... good luck in the contest..pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2012 9:07:00 PM

GOOD one, describing the poet's dilemma, trying to write poems despite all the many things he has to attend to. I love where you took the theme. Just posted a poem, there is no way I am staying long tonight!! haha. I did two hours in the afternoon and now I have so much to catch up on in my house. Anyway, I saw your poem posted right under mine. How cool!!