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Two Worlds Colliding

a tranquil meadow dons a velvet lupine cloak... bees swarm in dark clouds vast fields honeycombed with flora and rabbit holes... hawks swoop down for prey By Carrie Richards......For Russell Sivey's Contest: Two Worlds Colliding

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2012 2:34:00 PM

Great description of beauty..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/16/2012 5:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2012 11:41:00 PM

CARRIE, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2012 7:03:00 PM

wow, marvelous senryu!! conflicts within nature beautifully penned.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/14/2012 10:07:00 AM

belated congrats, wonderful entry and winner.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/12/2012 6:28:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

David Williams

Date: 8/12/2012 2:31:00 AM

Carrie congrats on your great win....love the image of this one..David

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2012 11:36:00 AM

Beautiful imagery, Carrie. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 8/8/2012 6:38:00 PM

Life and death yup! the beat goes on! Light & Love

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/8/2012 6:04:00 PM

'don's a velvet lupine cloak'...my favorite of 6 exquisite lines...great work as usual, Carrie! - Tim