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Two Worlds Colliding

a tranquil meadow 
dons a velvet lupine cloak...
bees swarm in dark clouds 

vast fields honeycombed
with flora and rabbit holes...
hawks swoop down for prey

By Carrie Richards......For Russell Sivey's Contest: Two Worlds Colliding

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  1. Date: 8/18/2012 2:34:00 PM
    Great description of beauty..((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/16/2012 5:53:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Russell's "Two Worlds Colliding" contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 11:41:00 PM
    CARRIE, a warm congratulations in Russell Sivey's "Two Worlds Colliding " contest. had fun catching up with all the winners xox~ PD

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 7:03:00 PM
    wow, marvelous senryu!! conflicts within nature beautifully penned.

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 10:07:00 AM
    belated congrats, wonderful entry and winner.

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 6:28:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/12/2012 2:31:00 AM
    Carrie congrats on your great the image of this one..David

  1. Date: 8/11/2012 11:36:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery, Carrie. Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 6:38:00 PM
    Life and death yup! the beat goes on! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 6:04:00 PM
    'don's a velvet lupine cloak' favorite of 6 exquisite lines...great work as usual, Carrie! - Tim