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Two Shadows

Two shadows on the wall
The slightest hint of swaying
If I knew any better
My sanity's decaying

The pendulum moves silently
And casts a double shade
If my thoughts weren't haunted
It would be a sight of grace

Though instead it reminds me
Of my consuming dread
That perhaps he won't return
Perhaps my love is dead

July 2010

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  1. Date: 8/2/2011 10:26:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Destiny. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 8:54:00 AM
    Great name Mr Destiny, Congratulations on your poems' capture of the first round. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/17/2011 7:53:00 AM
    Destiny, great poem , last line sums up nicely. Looking forward to reading more of your work .Anne

  1. Date: 11/6/2010 3:28:00 PM
    Hello Destiny, I am so glad I chose this one to read. It is wonderful! I so enjoy reading you As Always, Shar

  1. Date: 10/25/2010 1:10:00 PM
    you are now one of my favorite poets

  1. Date: 9/9/2010 12:11:00 PM
    This is really an amazing piece. I really like it but I am pretty cynical. Well anyways great poem.

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 10:24:00 PM
    Haunting poem, but I'll say it took talent to write it, the ending is especially excellent, and you held on to the rhythm very nicely.

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 7:04:00 PM
    So enjoyed your creativity tonight Destiny... great comparisons with the pendulum and the shadows... almost like Halloween ...check out the new contests posted luv.. good luck..with luv..

  1. Date: 9/8/2010 6:32:00 PM
    Slightly on the dark side where I like to walk. Excellent read, pure poetry stanza after stanza with a most satisfying ending.