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Two Peas In a Pod

Two peas in a pod? My April and me? No, not at all, I would not agree She is all sunshine laughter and light I’m shrouded in darkness too much like the night She is artistic, outgoing well read, I’m the quiet, shy redhead But no matter what my sister and me, on one thing, we’ll always agree Our friendship is tried and true over the years it grew and grew deeply rooted as Aspen trees snug as a bug a pod with two peas Yes, I have to agree though we are far apart my April is closely endeared in my heart. Trudy Diane Rider 8-21-2009 For My sister April, I miss her. For Nathan's contest

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Danny Nunn

Date: 9/11/2009 3:04:00 PM

Trudy, good luck in the contest with this one, in my book it is a winner...thanks for the nice word on Praise The Lord and Pass The Ammunition...Danny Nunn

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 9/2/2009 2:03:00 PM

DEAR Trudy, A Beautiful write about Your sister and YOU Good luck in the contest Thank YOU for choosing my POEM "LOVE'S Passion" in YOUR First Contest Muchly Appreciated LOVE ALWAYS...HG

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 9/1/2009 3:14:00 AM

It is fantastic to have such a relationship with a sister and you depict that with tenderness and feeling. I have 6 sisters and we are like 7 big peas in a big pod, its's great. I am chuffed to see that I have had success in your competition moreso as it's my first competition. I enjoyed entering. Best regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

Robert Davidson

Date: 8/25/2009 6:31:00 AM

Reminds me a little of my two redheaded daughters; they are quite engaging or should I say bickering but don't knock them they will gang up on you. Nice one and thanks so much for your lovely comments on my poetry. Robert

Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/21/2009 10:49:00 PM

an endearing piece about siblings full of heartfelt love and friendship,,a marvelous write,,blessings..Cecil and thank you for reading and commentig upon my words.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/21/2009 4:01:00 PM

Trudy, I am wishing you the best in the contest. Thank you for all your kind words today. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/21/2009 2:03:00 PM

Trudy, my sister and have a few things in common -- writing, theater and dance -- but we could never be two peas in a pod. She is highly critical, explosive and speaks her mind. I never know what to expect from her. Obviously, your wonderful tribute to April got me thinking. Just having a sister is quite a gift, even when the pod seems to be separated into two chambers. Delightful read! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2009 1:25:00 PM

Nice to have a sister that can be a friend. Keep writing. God speed in the contest. Sara