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Two Lovers

Through a meadow clothed in daffodils Two lovers walk hand in hand The birds are singing up in the trees So sweet like a celestial band. His hand it gently caresses her waist As he whispers "I love you" Her heart it beats a little faster As she feels the same way too. She gives his hand a gentle squeeze As passion explodes inside And with a gentle kiss she says "I want to be your bride". They come to the end of the meadow As the sun sets behind a hill "He says darling will you marry me" "She says of course I will".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/18/2009 8:06:00 PM
Truly romanticism at its very best.. the "happy ending" story we are all looking for..u have written this so beautifully, Leon, and I so enjoyed immersing myself in this meadow... thankxxx for sharing.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 8/31/2009 2:42:00 PM
Oh! So romantic and descriptive. Swoon, Swoon. Sara
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Date: 8/7/2009 4:52:00 AM
Beautiful love story..Message Conveyed nicely.
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Date: 7/12/2009 5:34:00 AM
aww so sweet, a devotional write God bless you
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Date: 7/8/2009 9:31:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL POEM, Oh SO LOVELY!
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