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Two Ice Cubes

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Two Ice Cubes

Placed two ice cubes on a hill...
Watched them glide as they will...

The blissful ride took many turns...
Dripping through a path of many yearns...
Destination is a warm sweet place...
Where raining flames kiss my face...

Each cube melts in the oven of enticement...
Where it can be tasted on lips with pure excitement...

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  1. Date: 2/19/2013 11:56:00 AM
    I like this one too !

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 6:28:00 PM
    Nice to read your write this eve. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/23/2012 2:11:00 AM
    love this image,truly sensual ..great write and congrad s on your win Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 1:09:00 PM
    A fun and sensuous write Michael

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 9:59:00 PM
    Michael, , congratulations on giving Tracie, "What she rEaLlY rEaLlY WaNt-ed" always~ PD.....

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 8:12:00 PM
    wow :-) Michael..I'm gliding down the hill along with the melting image... hot hot... love it... always~PD

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 6:22:00 PM
    nicely done and nicely won, Michael. What a novel idea on the two ice cubes. I see you have your santa clause hat in the picture. ME LIKES.

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 11:38:00 AM
    Michael congrats on your big win my friend, loved it first time around....David

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 11:34:00 AM
    Hi Michael set free ice cubes beautiful, sooner put them in some rum and black though, loved this poem great, all the best Owen

  1. Date: 12/18/2012 1:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Santa xx

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:20:00 AM
    woow, beautifu lSanta Michael, my fav verse is "Where raining flames kiss my face..." so romantic! I have my good reading today, thank you for share Santa :D

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 4:00:00 AM
    oh i agree with catie...very sultry!! gets one's imagination going that is for sure lol....amazing what you can do with ice cubes hehehe.....Shaz

  1. Date: 12/13/2012 9:51:00 AM
    i'll never look at my ice cubs the same way again,, love this Michael, it's different, and a little hot...just love the last stanza

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 9:46:00 PM
    sultry! Loved it. hugs, catie :)

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 8:52:00 PM
    Hi Michael your new look..ha ha and thank you for your ice cubes,,, enjoyed it much...nice day to you Santa...<3<3<3

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 5:01:00 PM
    Haha..very cute write :)

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 4:23:00 PM
    perfect rythmatic flow! calculated almost...hahaha, take care and God bless, please check out the final masterpiece, will be gone the rest of the next couple months off the computer. and know that I appreciated your encouragement on the concrete poem of the rose, today the world was supposed to end? well, God said no, I guess... people trying to calculate, no wonder our country is in depth, wrote a new 1 today. Love ya Brother, Cindy

    Cayton Avatar Cindy Cayton
    Date: 12/12/2012 4:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    debt=depth, oops and I revised the rose into a rose in a vase on a table..... :) :) :) :) :) :) and many, many more!
  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:57:00 PM
    This is my very first ice cube poem,,...what great ideas u have elaborated there nothing u can't write about???....Fun. U wear Santa's hat nicely!! Gotta get myself one of those! :)

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 2:16:00 PM
    soup mail...

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 10:16:00 AM
    Another outstanding couplet which i enjoyed reading my dear friend, Michael! Thank you so much for sharing and again for you kind visit! More power and blessings! love and hugs, Leonora