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Two Headed Turtle

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A two headed turtle in a bed blue Slept whole night through close to his brother too Contest: Two Timer's Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi

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Lillie Williams

Date: 11/14/2012 2:46:00 PM

Now this is exciting, I love this so much. Thanks Sara. :-)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/23/2012 12:06:00 PM

Very clever how you used all the 2's yet this simply discribed the picture Sara and it was not my intent to chain you in at all..no need to work off the picture or to use more than 1 of the 2's sorry I was unclear. I wanted you to have the freedom to write any 2 lined forms [hopefully one you hadn't tried before] the only rule being the use of 1 word [to] or [too] or [two] Light & Love

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/22/2012 12:00:00 PM

Creative and interesting, as usual.

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/22/2012 11:48:00 AM

wonderful write Sara,best wishes

Sabrina Robillard

Date: 10/22/2012 10:41:00 AM

Such a creative poem! Good luck! :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/22/2012 7:17:00 AM

cannot get much closer than that, Sara, what a wonderful two liner, awesome....

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/21/2012 8:20:00 PM

So cool Sara; your to's are all in the right place and the subject is a head turner. All the best in the contest. Love Lizzie

Len Gasun

Date: 10/21/2012 6:39:00 PM

This is a very fascinating couplet which I enjoy reading it today, Sara. Good luck in the contest! love/hugs:) Leonora

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/21/2012 6:13:00 PM

originality at its best, sara... a finly written piece for debbie.. winning success and huggs!..:)

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/21/2012 3:10:00 PM

I just love this humorous write my friend! This is a tremendous and glorious poem Sara! I really enjoyed your wonderful piece that you have written here. This is a cute write with a two headed little turtle, awwww! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!