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Two Fools

Shallow ground forgot to wept
all the words that thrown were kept
and if I were you today
I think that you had more to say
and if you were for me that night
then why all the burden to begin that fight
I shall not keep these simple rules
If you and I are just two fools...

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  1. Date: 3/8/2011 7:04:00 AM
    two fools who may tend to fight, but the making up makes it right.

  1. Date: 10/1/2010 6:19:00 AM
    Congrates on having your poem featured this week ... "if you and I are just two fools" loved that end line Jessica well done love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/30/2010 8:32:00 PM
    Well said, Jessica...Congratulations on your poem featured this week on Soup! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 9/29/2010 8:51:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 5:01:00 PM
    congrats on having your poem featured on the soup Jessica well deserved :)...P.D.

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 9:39:00 AM
    This was a beautiful addition to Soup, I felt the emotion in this poem, it was well penned. One for my fave's if I may :). This was truly powerful, especially the ending. Well don, your feature is well deserved! Beautiful. --Madison

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 9:04:00 AM
    Nice and interesting Poem. Congrats for it being your featured poem of the week. Love and best wishes..Ravindra...Jessica Arteaga

  1. Date: 9/27/2010 6:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Jessica. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/26/2010 2:54:00 PM
    Congrats Jessica on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all my friend with luv...

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 1:06:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 12:25:00 PM
    : ) Very well penned! ...and great ending lines, Jessica. Good one. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 11:41:00 AM
    Interesting thoughts penned in this one.I am glad that I chose this as one of the one that I was to read today..Sara

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 10:24:00 AM
    Nicely written, the first line kind of made me stumble but the flow took off from there.

  1. Date: 9/20/2010 10:16:00 AM
    enjoyed your poem,..p.d.