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Two Entwined

Regret drips slowly 
down the terraced walls, it never falls.
A thick green moss forms in the shadows,
a smothering caul. 

~He was a friend to all.~ 

Forevers were sworn,
all that's left are yesterdays, long gone.
What will tomorrow bring, will it be
the joy for which we long? 

~Daughter, Wife, Mother, Mine.~  

A blanket shelters
naked, tearful, truths, and pain we'll not see
like the moss it cloaks regret in dark
cloaking you and me.  

~Two truthful souls lie here.~ 

The ending's so near
But still we try - and still we cry on
for little do we know how close it is, 
how far, how near, gone.

 3 Epitaph's & Quatrain
Poets ~ Craig Cornish & Debbie Guzzi
Date 9/23/13

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  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:43:00 PM
    Way to go winning lady..Great work ..Congrats to you and Craig..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 11:08:00 AM
    nice team work........... lovely win............SKAT

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:17:00 PM
    Great team work, congratulations to you both.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:45:00 PM
    congrats on win in team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 8:50:00 AM
    Ahh......two of the finer poets in a wonderful collaboration........what a terrific piece of old world poetry! Excellent!

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:17:00 AM
    Love such work,, when two very fine poets piece together and create something like this. This is pure and sublime to me, Debbie!! Much love...

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:46:00 AM
    very cool write enjoyed

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:37:00 AM
    Great, so very touching. ^_^ Y.L.N

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:30:00 AM
    gorgeous writing from you two. You are a dynamic duo!!

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 12:01:00 AM
    This is very sad yet so very beautiful dear Deborah and Craig..Touched me in many ways..