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Regret drips slowly down the terraced walls, it never falls. A thick green moss forms in the shadows, a smothering caul. ~He was a friend to all.~ Forevers were sworn, all that's left are yesterdays, long gone. What will tomorrow bring, will it be the joy for which we long? ~Daughter, Wife, Mother, Mine.~ A blanket shelters naked, tearful, truths, and pain we'll not see like the moss it cloaks regret in dark cloaking you and me. ~Two truthful souls lie here.~ The ending's so near But still we try - and still we cry on for little do we know how close it is, how far, how near, gone. 3 Epitaph's & Quatrain Poets ~ Craig Cornish & Debbie Guzzi Date 9/23/13

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Date: 10/3/2013 1:43:00 PM
Way to go winning lady..Great work ..Congrats to you and Craig..Sara
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Date: 10/3/2013 11:08:00 AM
nice team work........... lovely win............SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:17:00 PM
Great team work, congratulations to you both.
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Date: 10/1/2013 3:45:00 PM
congrats on win in team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/26/2013 8:50:00 AM
Ahh......two of the finer poets in a wonderful collaboration........what a terrific piece of old world poetry! Excellent!
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Date: 9/25/2013 11:17:00 AM
Love such work,, when two very fine poets piece together and create something like this. This is pure and sublime to me, Debbie!! Much love...
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:46:00 AM
very cool write enjoyed
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Date: 9/24/2013 12:37:00 AM
Great collaboration...wow, so very touching. ^_^ Y.L.N
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Date: 9/24/2013 12:30:00 AM
gorgeous writing from you two. You are a dynamic duo!!
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Date: 9/24/2013 12:01:00 AM
This is very sad yet so very beautiful dear Deborah and Craig..Touched me in many ways..
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