Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Two Elephants

Deborah Burch Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Two Elephants which was written by poet Deborah Burch. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Deborah Burch

Best Deborah Burch Poems

+ Fav Poet

Two Elephants

Two Elephants

There once were two very large elephants
Who, night and day, ate only jelly-ants
'Till one day one said
To the other one, "Fred,
I do believe you have on smelly pants!!"

deborah burch©

Copyright © Deborah Burch

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 2/10/2013 6:20:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:30:00 AM
    Cap'n Deb congrats on your win..very funny ...David

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 8:32:00 PM
    Cute, Deborah! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 7:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "#2 Another Crazy & Fun Limerick" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 2:28:00 AM
    Big Congrats Debs so funny love it xx soup

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 10:29:00 PM
    You're too funny, Deborah! Congratulations on your win in PD's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 9:44:00 PM
    hahaha, this is a funny one to picture. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 6:46:00 PM
    Congrats, Deb. Great job. Nice going. Kudos. hugs., Ralph

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:58:00 PM
    Debbie....u BIG kid, U! Funny limerick! :) Congrats.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 12:41:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 1:21:00 PM
    yayyyyy, laughing non-stop, deborah.. cool piece with winning hugggs!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 1:01:00 PM
    Ha Ha!! I just love this very clever write my friend! You are a genius! What a fabulous and excellent poem Debbie! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 12:08:00 PM
    HA HA - EXCELLENT - 10/10 Debs. What fun!!! I'm so glad you found a use for elephants and smelly pants, ha ha. I'll be laughing all evening.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Cap'n Deb, ha haaaaaaa, you really are a nut, but love ya...David

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 11:49:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 10:24:00 AM
    Sweet and funny Deborah ! - oxox love Anne-Lise

    Burch Avatar Deborah Burch
    Date: 6/10/2012 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you deat Anne Lise :) i was visiting josie and this is what came of it... love ya,deb