Two

In hot days, cool nights summer recalls the fracture of this heart from yours. Twice over, can healing be forgetting, or forgiveness?

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/10/2008 12:06:00 PM

Tracy great write Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Laura :)

Date: 7/9/2008 11:26:00 AM

So much said in these few words. I like the questioin you pose at the end. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/9/2008 4:11:00 AM

Tracy,congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 7/7/2008 3:07:00 PM

Hi Tracy Enjoyed much! I think its forgiveness since we never forget....Congrats on your beautiful poem being featured this week! Love Light Truth Patricia

Marycile Beer

Date: 7/7/2008 10:48:00 AM

A very good question, Tracy. Keep up the good work and give us more things to think about, God Bless, Cilr

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/7/2008 9:07:00 AM

Tracy - congrats on having your tanka featured this week - great job

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 7/7/2008 6:21:00 AM

Congratulations Tracy, on the featuring of your tanka "TWO". Vince

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/6/2008 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations dear Tracy on your always amazing poetry being featured this week. So well deserved. Love, Shar