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'Twisted Segments'

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'Twisted Segments'

Twisted segments Somehow floated together The missing pieces of a long forgotten puzzle Found their home Faded pictures brought back to life Each telling their own story Do they make you smile today? I know it has been a while The warmth of memories Chasing negativity away It is okay to start again It is okay to lift your head up high No one will judge you No one dare to judge you They never walked in your shoes They never felt what you felt This was and still is your journey The choices you make Are ultimately yours You are a warrior Sometimes twisted segments Paints a brilliant picture Even to the ones who stand on the outside ©132311102013

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  1. Date: 3/18/2014 10:30:00 AM
    nice poem maybe it would be more powerful in different paragraphical order? just a suggestion

  1. Date: 1/31/2014 3:41:00 PM
    Thoughts to consider, intentions to peruse, wether to decide; and what conclusions can be drawn.? Again well done Wilma..'

  1. Date: 10/17/2013 8:58:00 PM
    splendid write Wilma....I will fav this wishes

  1. Date: 10/14/2013 10:12:00 AM
    oh my, judge not unless you judge yourself first...a profound write portraying the value of non-discrimation; fearless penning!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 12:31:00 PM
    Wilma, Wilma, Wilma, oh this is just great, a very heartfelt write and full of so much truth, we often feel we are being judged, very well done...David

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 3:54:00 PM
    splendid writing, Wilma. You are a "sensitive."

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 1:14:00 AM
    Wilma my beautiful and dear friend...In my humble opinion this is your best work to date...It made me feel like a warrior - Tim

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 11:29:00 AM
    We humans are prone to judging, it is so wonderful we have a God who is willing to remove the sting of that judgement from us. I very much enjoyed this poem, well expressed!

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 9:07:00 AM
    Yes, it is very ok to start again. Power on. Fantastic message!

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 7:46:00 AM
    This goes to my bible favs, it cuts through the truth like a scalpel in a surgeons hand, I have missed you Baby Face, hope all is well with you, life throws curve balls my way, rather than duck I go there, to the wind I talk sweet talk, love you girl, stay sweet, I am counting on your dear heart, to keep me there xxx

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 7:22:00 AM
    A very touching poem cause its so easy to judge in life without knowing the true segments of a persona's life..Outstanding poem dear.Hope you are doing fine

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:50:00 AM
    This is such a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have surely brought splendor to an awesome piece! What a tremendous poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 10/11/2013 6:38:00 AM
    - Yes, "image" becomes beautiful when all the pieces are put together. - Pleasant and well written poem dear Wilma. - I wish you a beautiful weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)