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Twisted Defeat

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Below is the poem entitled Twisted Defeat which was written by poet Christina McCallum. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Twisted Defeat

Soundless words gather in the mist of your ever-changing stature
Contorting banter smothers the landscape of your toil
Your soul is defined through pillage of thought and pleasure
Whispers and taunts explode without truth
Circling the antics of foolish affairs
Your respect stains below wicked feet
Gnawing the attentive to reap consideration of being great
Your masquerade was open to me
Groping the passive nature from within
Accepting the ignorance of others
Clutching the fight for happiness
Insubordinate dupe your talent is lacked
Gather your forces I am not coming back
 

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  1. Date: 12/2/2012 7:53:00 PM
    Christina McCallum ,,, congratulations with your poem featured on the soup home page... love it~ LINDA

    McCallum Avatar Christina McCallum
    Date: 12/4/2012 8:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda... I was shocked to see it picked!
  1. Date: 11/29/2012 9:49:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoyed reading your thoughts. Line six, powerful statement. Thanks for sharing, John

    McCallum Avatar Christina McCallum
    Date: 11/30/2012 9:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It has been sometime since I have brought memory and pen together. Feeling rusty however I am feeling I have much to say :). Thank you for your comment.