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Twilight Musings

the sunset glows as it grows less in flows twilight before dark night brief twilight reigns as light recedes the twilight brings quiet things and bird sings late note By: Joyce Johnson For Nette's contest ThanBauk A Twilight-

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2012 4:38:00 PM

Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading your winning entry.Congrats...Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/19/2012 3:59:00 PM

Some quiet is good..too much is lonely :( Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2012 5:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Joyce. Love, Carol

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/19/2012 12:07:00 AM

Splendid..One of the very best, congrats and thanx, luv, jag

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/18/2012 7:37:00 AM

would have been 1st in my book..well done. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/18/2012 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Joyce xx

Jack Horne

Date: 4/11/2012 7:23:00 AM

i love this atmospheric piece, joyce. many congrats on your wins

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/11/2012 2:19:00 AM

thanks for joining, joycel.. so nice!.. kindly check rhyme pattern and syl count... i have placed an example on the contest page.. if you need to revise, just edit and update your poem... will do another blog on this later!:) .. it seems fine with me though i have to double -check near judging time!...huggs!

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/10/2012 10:06:00 PM

Excellent form Joyce... :) big huggsss,love deb

Kash Poet

Date: 4/10/2012 10:02:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in this write Joyce.Love it.