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Twilight Descends

indigo sky now tells my soul goodbye the day stars twinkle bright as twilight falls the night creeps in twilight descends as night lends voice it mends my soul ~~~~~ Francine Roberts 11/04/2012 for "Than-Bauk a Twilight" contest

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/1/2012 10:19:00 PM

Succinct, and beautifully written. There is certainly something special about twilight... as you say, 'it mends the soul. Best wishes, Keith

Terry L. Allen

Date: 4/29/2012 12:09:00 AM

Nice pictoral well painted neat style. I enjoyed the picture that it painted. My favorite time of day in about 5:30 - 6:00 in the AM while most of the world is still asleep. I love to watch and listen to it wake up. Warm Huggs TLee

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2012 4:40:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats ..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/19/2012 4:00:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2012 5:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Francine. Love, Carol

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/18/2012 12:29:00 PM

I'm not usually in love with short poems but this was great. You can totally pull it off.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/18/2012 11:32:00 AM

I don't know how she judged among these good offerings. Congratulations. Love, Joyce.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/18/2012 7:36:00 AM

This one is one of my favorites..very ceautiful. congrats. BG

The Situation

Date: 4/13/2012 11:44:00 PM

for another day to begin.

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 4/13/2012 8:53:00 PM

I enjoyed this so much! I especially liked the last line. I think Nette will place this high, hon! Hugs, Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2012 6:50:00 AM

this is a very well done than-bauk. They are NOT easy to do. I think mine took nearly 2 hours and I kept falling asleep doing it!! (still didn't post it yet) I hope this scores high in the contest!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/11/2012 5:22:00 PM

This filled me with delightful visuals to the brain. Very awesome poem! Always, Laura