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Twilight Descends

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Twilight Descends

indigo sky
now tells my soul
goodbye the day

stars twinkle bright
as twilight falls
the night creeps in

twilight descends
as night lends voice
it mends my soul


Francine Roberts  11/04/2012
for "Than-Bauk a Twilight" contest

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  1. Date: 5/1/2012 10:19:00 PM
    Succinct, and beautifully written. There is certainly something special about twilight... as you say, 'it mends the soul. Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 12:09:00 AM
    Nice pictoral well painted neat style. I enjoyed the picture that it painted. My favorite time of day in about 5:30 - 6:00 in the AM while most of the world is still asleep. I love to watch and listen to it wake up. Warm Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:40:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats ..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:00:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Francine. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 12:29:00 PM
    I'm not usually in love with short poems but this was great. You can totally pull it off.

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:32:00 AM
    I don't know how she judged among these good offerings. Congratulations. Love, Joyce.

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 7:36:00 AM
    This one is one of my favorites..very ceautiful. congrats. BG

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 11:44:00 PM
    for another day to begin.

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 8:53:00 PM
    I enjoyed this so much! I especially liked the last line. I think Nette will place this high, hon! Hugs, Cyndi

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:50:00 AM
    this is a very well done than-bauk. They are NOT easy to do. I think mine took nearly 2 hours and I kept falling asleep doing it!! (still didn't post it yet) I hope this scores high in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 5:22:00 PM
    This filled me with delightful visuals to the brain. Very awesome poem! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 4/11/2012 3:52:00 PM
    Beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. hugs, Catie :)