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Below is the poem entitled Twilight which was written by poet Debbie Guzzi. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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back-lit birch and pine
pierced with autumn's red and gold
tremble beneath clouds 
my broken heart weeps like rain
a lone loon calls revelry

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  1. Date: 10/21/2012 7:18:00 PM
    Love it ,,,,, you have a blessed day Debbie ;}

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Very lovely. Congrats on your win! :) Tanya

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 2:25:00 AM
    twilight inspires!..clappies for your win, debbie!

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 4:15:00 AM
    Big congrats from Spain xx

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:06:00 PM
    How lovely. Look forward to reading more of your work. pvp

  1. Date: 10/13/2012 10:03:00 PM
    beautiful poem Debbie, well done and congrats on your first place win. lee

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:30:00 PM
    Wonderful and intriguing write,Debbie..Congratulations on your well deserved win....

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 10:09:00 AM
    A1 win for an A1 write, Debbie. Congrats!! One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 7:36:00 AM
    You are dazzling at the TOP with this beautiful Tanka Debi !Congrats on your top win.

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 3:52:00 AM
    CongratsDebbie on your great win with this beautiful Tanka!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 2:27:00 AM
    Congrats on your win with this awesome Tanka!

  1. Date: 10/12/2012 12:16:00 AM
    Awesome, Debs!!! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 11:07:00 PM
    Beautiful Deb, Many congrats on this win.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 10:36:00 PM
    Lovely! I like the way you've eased into the second part. Nice! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 10:36:00 PM
    Congratulations Debbie. I'll have to do some reading up on the Tanka, so I can be as clever as you, but maybe the run on them will be over soon. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 6:45:00 PM
    a wonderful poem and a well-deserved win! congratulations!

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 6:19:00 PM
    wonderful write......I like the" weeps like rain" line.....congrats on a great win...

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:20:00 PM
    Chris A. is an excellent tutor XXXOOO

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 3:12:00 PM
    Just exquisite in your images - congratulations.

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 1:45:00 PM
    Whew, Deb! me a little misty eyed here...absolutely perfectly done...each line is exquisite...many congrats - Tim