Twilight

back-lit birch and pine
pierced with autumn's red and gold
tremble beneath clouds 
my broken heart weeps like rain
a lone loon calls revelry

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 10/21/2012 7:18:00 PM

Love it ,,,,, you have a blessed day Debbie ;}

Tanya Harrington

Date: 10/16/2012 1:04:00 PM

Very lovely. Congrats on your win! :) Tanya

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/15/2012 2:25:00 AM

twilight inspires!..clappies for your win, debbie!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/14/2012 4:15:00 AM

Big congrats from Spain xx

Polly Plafcan

Date: 10/13/2012 10:06:00 PM

How lovely. Look forward to reading more of your work. pvp

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/13/2012 10:03:00 PM

beautiful poem Debbie, well done and congrats on your first place win. lee

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/12/2012 3:30:00 PM

Wonderful and intriguing write,Debbie..Congratulations on your well deserved win....

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/12/2012 10:09:00 AM

A1 win for an A1 write, Debbie. Congrats!! One love. Joy Wells

Kash Poet

Date: 10/12/2012 7:36:00 AM

You are dazzling at the TOP with this beautiful Tanka Debi !Congrats on your top win.

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 10/12/2012 2:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this awesome Tanka!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2012 12:16:00 AM

Awesome, Debs!!! Congratulations.

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/11/2012 11:07:00 PM

Beautiful Deb, Many congrats on this win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/11/2012 10:36:00 PM

Congratulations Debbie. I'll have to do some reading up on the Tanka, so I can be as clever as you, but maybe the run on them will be over soon. Love, Joyce