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'twas the Night Before Christmas

'Twas the night before Christmas and throughout all the land,

   Shoppers were swarming Penney's and Walmart without end!

     Wild-eyed mobs were elbowing each other without cease!

         'Tis another annual brawl!  So much for the Season of Peace!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Carol Eastman Date: 12/4/2012 10:54:00 AM So so true. I never go out on black Friday. All those people could save and go on other days, earlier or later... The stores are just trying to hit upon our greed and to start a feeding frenzy. I wrote a poem called 'Kitty Claus' years ago. It was too long to post here till now. I wish you an enjoyable Christmas. Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 12/3/2012 3:39:00 PM Second line, It was a shopping nightmare, like combat, hand to hand. Please forgive my interjection, I do know what I do. :) Merry Christmas, good will towards man. :) Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 12/2/2012 2:42:00 AM Bob, how very true, the true meaning has long gone...David Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 12/1/2012 5:39:00 PM What? You didn't join in on Black Friday?....?Great, as usual. BG Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2012 5:38:00 PM good job with this one. I was wondering if the contest meant only one quatrain and I think it does now. Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 12/1/2012 4:02:00 PM Quite another masterfully crafted write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this intriguing and wondrous poem this evening Bob! You delighted me to no end with this piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply