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'twas All Wild

‘’twas all wild—All wind, All shores:
Seas were brewing savage storms;
Rambling clouds were moving thunder—
Thunder herself, did her chores…
 With white, foaming, briny waters—
The fleet of men crossing them—
Howling Capes and crowing Bergs
That ever saw trespassing them,
Witnessed the lot being washed—
The visor of Mercy being cracked…

The howling, screaming, deathly Play
Waited the time Night approached
To aide—to rescue hacked and chopped
With farewell bid to the angered Day:
Time now when the Rivers—joining hands
(That had shrieked and showed their might)
No more chid the juvenile Bank—
Traveled course in faded light,
Whilst the strength of Fury lay
To tell Quiet of squandered Peace…

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  1. Date: 12/23/2012 7:44:00 AM

    khan Avatar sarojkumar khan
    Date: 12/23/2012 7:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

  1. Date: 10/18/2012 9:02:00 PM
    Akash, here I am with a be-lated :-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " April, 2011 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD

  1. Date: 1/6/2012 5:36:00 AM
    what a piece. and the imagery. wow is all i can say. well done and congrats on you win.

  1. Date: 12/1/2011 8:10:00 AM
    Passionate, vivid imagery to take the reader through the storm that your mind has created. I felt part of the whole scene, thank you for the adventure!

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 9:21:00 PM
    A masterpiece! Absolutely stunning! The imagery and the diction is out of this world! Thank you for sharing and May God Bless! Congratulations as well.

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 8:07:00 PM
    Awesome! Superbly done! Congratulations on the well deserved winnings!

  1. Date: 10/9/2011 5:54:00 AM
    One word comes to mind: powerful. Powerful words arouse powerful images. Tip to the reader: read out loud

  1. Date: 9/30/2011 11:30:00 AM
    amazing writing and imagery!

  1. Date: 9/15/2011 7:13:00 AM
    You've really buuild in the power of the storm, really enjoyed reading this piece, cngrats on the PS Win!!!

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 9:01:00 PM
    Congratulations Akash! Enjoyed reading this! Enjoy your very fine win!

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 7:50:00 AM
    Congratulations to you Akash for such a great win

  1. Date: 8/28/2011 9:51:00 AM
    CONGRATULATIONS my friend with this elegant masterpiece written with aesthetic wisdom of immeasurable thoughts and ideas~~~~LOL~~~~smile~~~*-*junjun

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 8:34:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in this international contest. Well done. Lee

  1. Date: 8/24/2011 3:45:00 PM
    This poem is utterly beautiful. Love your work of art Akash, Congratulations my dear.

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 7:58:00 PM
    Congrats on your super win in PS international contest luv.. wonderful write..

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 3:40:00 PM
    Congratulations April, 2011 3rd Place Contest Winner! Caryl Ramsdale

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 10:12:00 AM
    Congrats Akash on this imagism being a winner in the contest. Vince

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 7:42:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in PoetrySoup's International Poetry Contest Akash. I am very happy for you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 8:12:00 PM
    beyond my imaginings! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 4:37:00 PM
    Congratulations Akash on your 3rd place win in the International Contest.Beautiful write.