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'twas All Wild

‘’twas all wild—All wind, All shores: Seas were brewing savage storms; Rambling clouds were moving thunder— Thunder herself, did her chores… With white, foaming, briny waters— The fleet of men crossing them— Howling Capes and crowing Bergs That ever saw trespassing them, Witnessed the lot being washed— The visor of Mercy being cracked… The howling, screaming, deathly Play Waited the time Night approached To aide—to rescue hacked and chopped With farewell bid to the angered Day: Time now when the Rivers—joining hands (That had shrieked and showed their might) No more chid the juvenile Bank— Traveled course in faded light, Whilst the strength of Fury lay To tell Quiet of squandered Peace…

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Date: 10/4/2015 5:33:00 PM
The images are amazing. Lovely write
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Date: 12/23/2012 7:44:00 AM
VERY NICE POEM SAROJ KHAN[SAKHA]
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Sarojkumar Khan
Date: 12/23/2012 7:46:00 AM
WWW.POETRY.COM SEARCH SAROJ KHAN BEST POET AND POEM OF 2007 AND 2008 GOLD MEDAL WINNER
Date: 10/18/2012 9:02:00 PM
Akash, here I am with a be-lated :-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " April, 2011 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
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Date: 1/6/2012 5:36:00 AM
what a piece. and the imagery. wow is all i can say. well done and congrats on you win.
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:10:00 AM
Passionate, vivid imagery to take the reader through the storm that your mind has created. I felt part of the whole scene, thank you for the adventure!
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Date: 10/27/2011 9:21:00 PM
A masterpiece! Absolutely stunning! The imagery and the diction is out of this world! Thank you for sharing and May God Bless! Congratulations as well.
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Date: 10/27/2011 8:07:00 PM
Awesome! Superbly done! Congratulations on the well deserved winnings!
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Date: 10/9/2011 5:54:00 AM
One word comes to mind: powerful. Powerful words arouse powerful images. Tip to the reader: read out loud
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:30:00 AM
amazing writing and imagery!
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:13:00 AM
You've really buuild in the power of the storm, really enjoyed reading this piece, cngrats on the PS Win!!!
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Date: 9/10/2011 9:01:00 PM
Congratulations Akash! Enjoyed reading this! Enjoy your very fine win!
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Date: 8/29/2011 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations to you Akash for such a great win
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:51:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS my friend with this elegant masterpiece written with aesthetic wisdom of immeasurable thoughts and ideas~~~~LOL~~~~smile~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 8/27/2011 8:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this international contest. Well done. Lee
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:58:00 PM
Congrats on your super win in PS international contest luv.. wonderful write..
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:40:00 PM
Congratulations April, 2011 3rd Place Contest Winner! Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/23/2011 10:12:00 AM
Congrats Akash on this imagism being a winner in the contest. Vince
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in PoetrySoup's International Poetry Contest Akash. I am very happy for you. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 8:12:00 PM
beyond my imaginings! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations Akash on your 3rd place win in the International Contest.Beautiful write.
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem winning the second place in the International Competition. You deserved it.
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in this internationaL CONTEST, I'm so proud of you, Akash
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:46:00 AM
Akash, enyoyed you great poem, Big Smile, enjoy your winnings. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations Akash on your fabulous Soup win with this wonderful write. Enjoy your honor, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:53:00 AM
Dear Akash, congratulations on your big win in the Soup Admin contest. Love, Carolyn
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