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Turned down heaven

God, having glimpse of my Love, missed heartbeat
was joyous seeing His creation adorning earth
was envious as for heaven such beauty He could not repeat
thought of ending her life on earth to give in heaven a berth
death struck, soul turned down heaven to be soulmate Ghost on earth     

By Hitendra Mehta

April 2011
For Members Contest - God, ghost & Love by Dr. Ram Mehta

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  1. Date: 4/19/2011 5:06:00 AM
    Congratulations Hitendra on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2011 5:04:00 PM
    i love the way the last line is worded

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 5:49:00 PM
    Great to see you at the top once more Hitendra. Congratulations on this worthy poem's honored fifth place. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 2:10:00 PM
    Many congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 1:14:00 PM
    Me again! LOL we will push you into the HOT list ;) Easy new bit of info...Titles capitalize all words 4 letters or more! Hugs! [I didn't know this either my Uncle was an ediitor for a magizine he wrote to tell me ;)] Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 7:47:00 AM
    It's a little too spooky! Nice write, and congrats to you

  1. Date: 4/16/2011 4:06:00 AM
    Super Congrats Hitendra on your big win with this excellent entry.. Gautami

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 8:54:00 PM
    Super fine Hitendra. Warmest congrats for this super win dear.

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 6:07:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win,Hitendra, nice to see you tonight on the list!

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 6:06:00 PM
    Verycreative, dear Hitendra. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 4:14:00 PM
    Congrats Hitendra on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest ..with this amazing write and entry luv.. enjoy your big win and happy weekend my friend...luv..

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 3:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 2:47:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win! Soup Mail

  1. Date: 4/15/2011 8:34:00 AM
    Congratulations on the fifth place win in my contest, Hitendra

  1. Date: 4/14/2011 6:33:00 AM
    I can relate to this poem Hitendra, I too love with the fullness of my heart, its either all or nothing at all. Perhaps that's why Father has kept me unattached for so long, out of jealousy:) Good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/13/2011 12:23:00 PM
    So many people die young, Hitendra, even babies. I like to think God is calling them home. It eases the grief. This is a wonderful entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 11:42:00 PM
    A very unusual story you came up with, quite interesting! I'm sorry to hear you have not had inspiration for Soup lately. I too am so busy,I can barely keep up anymore. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 2:51:00 PM
    Wow Hitendra .Thanks for the congrats.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 12:57:00 PM
    Ahhh sounds like Tara!! Lovely one dear. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/12/2011 8:01:00 AM
    Nice title and ending. Also a very unique perspective. Good luck in the contest!