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Turn of Fall

Cooling morning air Aspen leaves are golden disks spark’ling in the sun for Brian Strand's Images of Fall contest

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Date: 10/20/2009 2:00:00 AM
AWESOME HAIKU, TRUDY. LOVE, LAINIE
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Date: 9/11/2009 6:49:00 PM
the leaves here will soon be transforming as well..... nice write!
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Date: 9/1/2009 1:58:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. I like the thought of "golden disks/spark'ing in the sun." Uplifting view. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 8/25/2009 5:04:00 PM
How true, O haiku writer, you! One for the favorites file. Thank-you for your welcome comments, much appreciated! poet butterfly
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Date: 8/23/2009 7:06:00 PM
Well - the autumn poems are now beginning to appear on the "Soup" I especially like the line "Aspen leaves are golden disks". Very pretty and unique! Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/21/2009 11:22:00 AM
Nice Haiku Trudy, dreamy images my eyes are viewing, best of luck in the contest>>James
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Date: 8/21/2009 7:36:00 AM
I love the aspen.....what a wonderful image this gives me!!! :) Good luck in the contest, Trudy!
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Date: 8/21/2009 12:51:00 AM
Nicely written descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/20/2009 9:31:00 PM
Trudy how are you and Dave doing - I hope all is going ok - Wonderful poem and I wish you luck in the contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/20/2009 7:41:00 PM
love this poem too! jimbo
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