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Turn of Fall

Cooling morning air
Aspen leaves are golden disks
    spark’ling in the sun

for Brian Strand's Images of Fall contest

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  1. Date: 10/20/2009 2:00:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 6:49:00 PM
    the leaves here will soon be transforming as well..... nice write!

  1. Date: 8/25/2009 5:04:00 PM
    How true, O haiku writer, you! One for the favorites file. Thank-you for your welcome comments, much appreciated! poet butterfly

  1. Date: 8/23/2009 7:06:00 PM
    Well - the autumn poems are now beginning to appear on the "Soup" I especially like the line "Aspen leaves are golden disks". Very pretty and unique! Yours Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/21/2009 11:22:00 AM
    Nice Haiku Trudy, dreamy images my eyes are viewing, best of luck in the contest>>James

  1. Date: 8/21/2009 7:36:00 AM
    I love the aspen.....what a wonderful image this gives me!!! :) Good luck in the contest, Trudy!

  1. Date: 8/21/2009 12:51:00 AM
    Nicely written descriptive Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 9:31:00 PM
    Trudy how are you and Dave doing - I hope all is going ok - Wonderful poem and I wish you luck in the contest - God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 7:41:00 PM
    love this poem too! jimbo

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 7:13:00 PM
    Hey! What a "brilliant" image, Trudy! "spark’ling in the sun" ...great line. Good luck in the Contest. (you don't need it)Ruben.