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Try To Imagine

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/31/2009 3:36:00 PM

i can imagine a beautiful heaven--wonderful--charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/30/2009 4:24:00 PM

Very nice image of the pearly gates, Nate. Poems with the same syllable scheme as haikus that don't deal with nature are senryus. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 5/30/2009 1:38:00 PM

Nathan, this haiku IS about nature! It expresses recognition of our Creator; the Creator of all NATURE. And, of His creation's desire to commune with Him, then, to ultimately rest in His presence! I love it! Donna

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/30/2009 1:29:00 PM

Great imagery of the great beyond. ice work your work is heading in an awesome direction...Raul

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/30/2009 12:20:00 PM

Good write of going home to the pearly gates...good work.