Try Jesus

Are you feeling depressed and lonely
And you don't really have a care
You get yourself in such a state
And scream life is just not fair.

You feel that no-one loves you
You sit alone and cry
You get yourself in such a state
And scream to God why? why? why?

Why am I so depressed you say
Can't anybody see
If only I could rid myself
Of this lunacy.

But wait a minute I hear you say
Somethings come to me
I read this poem the other day
It said that God loves me.

It said that God so loved the world
He sent His Son to die
But can He rid me of this curse
I think I'll give Him a try.

After all said and done I have nothing to lose
But everything to gain
So Father turn my life around
I ask in Jesus name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/30/2009 2:56:00 PM
Very well written! Jesus is our Lord and savior,- darkpoet
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Date: 4/14/2009 11:40:00 AM
You got that right, Amen! Jesus is the answer to everything. Thanks for reminding us! Gerri
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Date: 4/11/2009 10:21:00 AM
I really like this Leon...Nice job...<3 Jese
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Date: 4/11/2009 4:39:00 AM
wonderful,i have goose pimples with this one now:-),its going to my favs.-bravo as always my friend-charma
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Date: 4/10/2009 8:26:00 AM
May your prayer be fufilled many times over Leon.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words & comments today
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Date: 4/10/2009 7:21:00 AM
beautiful written leon, God is the greatest of all comfo9rters, the greatest councilor, there is nothing that he can not do, A wonderful poem full of truth, God bless you and sue from diane and josh
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Date: 4/10/2009 1:20:00 AM
realy nice i cryed it was butiful have a nice ester god bless james
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Date: 4/9/2009 4:29:00 PM
This is so beautiful i cried because it's so inspiring it felt like you were talking to me giving me hope,and faith when i read this my heart feels it.I know Jesus is the solution all i have to do is let him in.Love Anesha
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Date: 4/9/2009 3:36:00 PM
I admire your devout faith, Leon. You are an inspiration! Love, Carolyn
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