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Why try why not try don't just give up don't die don't let nobody tell you not to try we all have moments when we can't see why we should try we don't want to get out of bed we can't see why life is oh so hard still we all must try some people let us down then we fall down it hurts sometime it takes it toll some vanish from this earth still we must try one day when fate change we won't see the rain our life won't be the same we'll smile so happy that day came. Copyright@August2009

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Date: 6/3/2013 8:27:00 PM
Nice poem.
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Date: 2/10/2010 11:51:00 AM
this is a great uplifting poem and it says alot cuz we all fall down but not all of us get back up! good write and i am hoping for fate to change. =)
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Date: 5/11/2021 8:50:00 PM
Hi, Joana thank you for the warm compliment. I really appreciate your kind words. I have not been on the site in a while. I look forward to reading your work.

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