Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

Trust me with your heart

shantae longmore Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Trust me with your heart which was written by poet shantae longmore. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by shantae longmore

Best Shantae Longmore Poems

+ Fav Poet

Trust me with your heart

Why does your heart grow doubtful dear?
Tense and beating,
Full of fear.
I keep with me your everlasting love,
And bless the day GOD sent you from up above to me.

You remain my angel and i feel i must,
Tell you that within you,
You have my trust.
My love is the tide,
Your soul is the shore's
Together are love is the shining star's,
You have my heart,
Do i have your's?

I'll belong to you till the very end of time,
And you will always be my lover and best friend forever till the end of time and forever more.
It has been so good like this from the very first time i met and laid eyes upon you.
So darling please,
Trust me with your heart,
As i trust you forever with mine.  

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 8:50:00 PM
    If I may give an honest critique... I really love the first 2 stanzas of this poem. The third however seems to need a little more work in my opinion. I know with some revision of the third stanza this poem could be really excellent.