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Truly Live

I feel the need to truly live soon once again in limbo caught in a rut destiny down the way sings a new tune. Upon a time, I stared dreamily at the moon wishing on I knew not exactly what I feel the need to truly live soon. Though much too late I broke out of my cocoon to my life struggle has been much destiny down the way sings a new tune. Zestful and to sadness I've become immune connected with reality and fully in touch I feel the need to truly live soon. Finally liberated and naturally wary of loons they ruined the best part of my days, but destiny down the way sings a new tune. A perpetual optimist still full of dreams and such A determined realist ready to celebrate with balloons I feel the need to truly live soon destiny down the way sings a new tune.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/21/2013 8:57:00 PM
Debra, it was nice stopping by all your poems tonight, a few had old comments by me... I am sorry I did not welcome you to the soup... a very late warm welcome to the soup... I am going to enjoy your poetry from here on. I read all your poems, and will continue. Thank you for stopping by my poem. your poetry was wonderful to read tonight, no matter what, you are a new favorite poet... take care and goodnight... LUV~ LINDA from Texas :-)
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Date: 6/9/2013 12:20:00 AM
Debra, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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Date: 4/21/2013 7:48:00 AM
As a late bloomer myself, I believe (as you) that we need to make the most out of the time we have. Wonderful poem here. Thank-you for your very kind comment.
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:40:00 PM
Sad but a nice write but really is it ever to late? I don't believe that there is always a way it might be different but I believe all things are possible.
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Date: 4/9/2013 7:24:00 AM
A very nice piece of writing. Good job.
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Date: 4/3/2013 8:29:00 AM
Excellent piece..I agree with Angel!!! Post more
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Date: 4/3/2013 6:11:00 AM
I wish that you'd post more, I like your work. very nice
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Date: 10/11/2012 2:04:00 AM
Lovely write Debra! A new outlook in life gives birth to a renewed energy in living. And being optimistic is always welcomed. Nice!
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Date: 9/30/2012 8:46:00 AM
Welcome to the wonderful world of PoetrySoup Debra. I wish you the best in your poetry travels. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2012 3:29:00 AM
i thoroughly enjoyed your work.have a great day
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Date: 9/30/2012 3:03:00 AM
I like your writing. We can never give up....Destiny does live down the way and soon it will touch us.....Holly Moore
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Date: 9/30/2012 2:41:00 AM
Excellent. Nice poem
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