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Truly Live

I feel the need to truly live soon
once again in limbo caught in a rut
destiny down the way sings a new tune.

Upon a time, I stared dreamily at the moon
wishing on I knew not exactly what
I feel the need to truly live soon.

Though much too late I broke out of my cocoon
to my life struggle has been much
destiny down the way sings a new tune.

Zestful and to sadness I've become immune
connected with reality and fully in touch
I feel the need to truly live soon.

Finally liberated and naturally wary of loons
they ruined the best part of my days, but
destiny down the way sings a new tune.

A perpetual optimist still full of dreams and such
A determined realist ready to celebrate with balloons
I feel the need to truly live soon
destiny down the way sings a new tune.

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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 8:57:00 PM
    Debra, it was nice stopping by all your poems tonight, a few had old comments by me... I am sorry I did not welcome you to the soup... a very late warm welcome to the soup... I am going to enjoy your poetry from here on. I read all your poems, and will continue. Thank you for stopping by my poem. your poetry was wonderful to read tonight, no matter what, you are a new favorite poet... take care and goodnight... LUV~ LINDA from Texas :-)

  1. Date: 6/9/2013 12:20:00 AM
    Debra, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful days ahead . Always & Forever! **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 7:48:00 AM
    As a late bloomer myself, I believe (as you) that we need to make the most out of the time we have. Wonderful poem here. Thank-you for your very kind comment.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Sad but a nice write but really is it ever to late? I don't believe that there is always a way it might be different but I believe all things are possible.

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 7:24:00 AM
    A very nice piece of writing. Good job.

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 8:29:00 AM
    Excellent piece..I agree with Angel!!! Post more

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 6:11:00 AM
    I wish that you'd post more, I like your work. very nice

  1. Date: 10/11/2012 2:04:00 AM
    Lovely write Debra! A new outlook in life gives birth to a renewed energy in living. And being optimistic is always welcomed. Nice!

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 8:46:00 AM
    Welcome to the wonderful world of PoetrySoup Debra. I wish you the best in your poetry travels. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 3:29:00 AM
    i thoroughly enjoyed your work.have a great day

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 3:03:00 AM
    I like your writing. We can never give up....Destiny does live down the way and soon it will touch us.....Holly Moore

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 2:41:00 AM
    Excellent. Nice poem