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Below is the poem entitled TRUE FRIENDS which was written by poet CRYSTAL MAAHI. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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People were jealous of us,
But we did not bother as much.
They tried to break our friendship,
But we hardly bothered about it.
People went against us,
When they saw you speaking to me.
I always thought they were insane,
But realized you were going through a lot of pain.
I cried every night,
Whenever you went away from my sight.
I felt like coming and hugging you that day, the day you cried and went away.
When you were suffering that pain,
I was crying again and again.
But the day you came and hugged me,
That day was the happiest one for me.	

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  1. Date: 11/8/2013 7:52:00 PM
    It's sound like a bonding friendship, golden hearts entwine xxx

  1. Date: 11/2/2013 5:49:00 PM
    hello Mahima, glad you have a friend like this:) don't ever let people take your happiness away. you are getting congratulations it's cuz your poem is a featured poem on the soups home page...unless you have entered a contest. .. hope that answered your question. ..hugs...linda