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Triple Redundant Tercets

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Triple Redundant Tercets

The ebb and flow of your life is in a constant state of flux.
While the “meat and potatoes” of a soul are at its’ core,
these sublimations are kept hidden deep inside.

They’re always under cover and kept hidden deep inside,
roiling your life with a tidal action to a constant state of flux,
while the “nitty grittys” of a soul are at its’ core.

The concept of souls are at its’ core.
Although souls are kept hidden deep inside,
they percolate life to a constant state of flux.

Your life is in a constant state of flux because the soul is at its’ core, hidden deep inside.

For Andrea's contest

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  1. Date: 3/10/2013 9:39:00 PM
    JOHN, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 7:45:00 AM
    John congrats on your HM..David

  1. Date: 3/10/2013 12:27:00 AM
    Congrats for your HM in my contest, John. I appreciate you trying out this new form!

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 8:05:00 PM
    John, you did a great job with the Tritina form for Andrea's contest. Even with the slight variations of certain lines, the repeated refrain almost comes across as a Villanelle of sorts. The overall effect is very strong.