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Faint away Ry Cooder as the candle flame danced reddish green and the wick crackled Cassiopeia together through the night screen crooned Diana Krall and a dying moon three white birds softly perched at the window sill hoping to join in their warble a suitable fit insects of every shape and watercolor tangoed past as if ordered by some higher authority stinging pain carom off the right side of my heart and get lost fall asleep earlier than smoking the wicker

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Date: 8/4/2011 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Alan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:59:00 AM
lovely! felt like i was in that room with you.
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alan. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/26/2011 5:45:00 AM
Very vivid picture painted. Soft sultry ambience - in keeping with Diana Krall. By the way, she is one of my favorites. Great writing, Alan. Many congrats on this feature of the week. Lainie
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Date: 4/25/2011 6:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured on the soup
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