Tricky

taste me let me drip down your throat

                                                  swallow me whole until you choke

feel me inside and out

                                    swooshing all about

pump more of me into you

                                              until you overload

reach depths to man unknown

                                                          enter all of me over and over again

i need to feel you eating me up

                                                  i want to feel you teasing me inside and out

i understand this is all new for you

                                                                            i am willing to take it slow

i suggest you slide into it gradually

                                                then go for the gusto

you will never have enough
 
                                                        you will always want more

knowledge is something that we all yearn for

                        what did you think i was talking about

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/11/2009 7:37:00 AM
Hi Brandy... great whit, and so cleverly done.. even if it wasn't "the bad" ? and what ever "knowing" could be labeled as such. Your talent is truly flowering Brandy.. keep it up
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Date: 6/11/2009 5:45:00 AM
You had me fooled! Wonderful ride and beautifully written. Knowledge is power and I acknowledge that you abused that power through a cleverly written poem! LOL Awesome write! {Des Juan }
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Date: 6/10/2009 3:40:00 PM
Clever write Brandy, if it went the way a lot of people thought it was going, it would have been a lovely road>James
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Date: 6/10/2009 1:33:00 PM
Well, my mind went down the avenue and lived for a moment enjoying a smoke with a drink to celebrate the smile I have on my face..you may say knowledge and I say welcome to paradise...well done.....
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Date: 6/10/2009 12:34:00 PM
Well, believing that You are one of true faith, I knew that whatever it was, it could hardly be that bad!!? Smile, and yes, knowledge is as gold; whether it be dust? Or whether it be nuggets? Of the world? Or of Heaven? Smile, yet, I loved Your twist upon it all; for it showed Your creativity, and quite an imagination! Excellent job, Brandy Megens!!:)~So, go spread the knowledge, and bless more lives...."Love To You & Yours, Always, John!!":) Bye Again Blessed Lady ~
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