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Below is the poem entitled Triangle which was written by poet Ken Carroll. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I love her
she's with him,
as she kisses him
who does she see?

She may see two,
maybe sometimes me,
I always knew
there was three,
can't love two...

just left of center
inside right triangle,
I am one,
a number in this triangle
blowing out my unlit candle...

Sometime she loves me
as she embraces him.
How did this begin?
Can love ever be?
Will this carnival ever end?

I want to be first
a one and only love,
no matter what I do,
I remain at number two,
a star beneath the moon...

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  1. Date: 5/16/2014 4:50:00 PM
    Hi Ken, to be caught In that old triangle. To wonder, am I first or second fiddle. A rather painful position to be In. I think your write actually says It all Ken. You don't actually need a running commentary from me. Sometimes one has to step back and look at the situation and make a choice for ones self. As usual ken, this Is a well thought out, well written poem. Your thoughts sail on Ken, may they do so for many to come my Friend. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 5/16/2014 5:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Mike!
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 7:25:00 AM
    Often shooting stars burn faster and brighter then the slow and steady glow, you have the know, Have a blessed day xxx

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 5/29/2013 7:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Mystic for visiting...Ken
  1. Date: 5/29/2013 3:59:00 AM
    - Beautiful poem, Kenneth! - Have a nice day. - (Feel free to read some of my poems) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Carroll Avatar Ken Carroll
    Date: 5/29/2013 6:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Anne-Lise for your kind commentary..I will read some of yours..Ken