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(Misery's Ghost)

With my eyes open wide
Ultra death sits by your bedside 

On your knees, you are crying!
On the floor, now you are dying!
Swallowing the pain inside, asking for the reaper himself.

If you want to see dead people
This GHOST will bring you face to face with the light
Then cross you over once you're in absolute fright
So you better reconsider your desire to see the spirit world, 
you could become part of it.
                   !!!                             .
Do you hear that low bubbling noise rising up from within?
Wait, wait that is he or she…. *The dead*
No...You are still gurgling of your stomach, is it?
This It is not hunger, it is not indigestion, it is Mount KILLomen about to blow
A Ghost effect leaving your soul blown-up in pieces minutes after the glow

A 'Ghost so potent enough it will wipe you off the face of the earth
Like a trace, every fragment of this Ghost is a killer 
If you kindle it you might not live to tell
You should exercise it with extreme caution
When ‘The Ghost’ is around
There is no going back, once you seen it
You’ll never find a way to fight off this evil intrusion!!

After you have lived, the ghost will haunt you long after your soul is dead and gone
First, the sensation that you're buried alive, 
then the frightening phenomena of feeling like the ghoul are trapped within, clawing its way out. 
You will enjoy your evening with the undead until they come to claim what is left
Living out loud your tortured soul

Soon you will find out you have inherited; SATAN'S BLOOD
This Ghost has a forked tongue
Misery made everyone think that he was just another ghost
Until you see, ‘The Ghost’ and what he or she has done?  
You will experience how it makes your blood boil like a thousand fiery lashes from Satan's whip, you might be able to escape his snare, hell if you can escape his stare.

Then you will wish for a Laxative
To flush the insanity, that haunts you through the years.
The End…………  

By: PD and The Ghost-CoWriter

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  1. Date: 6/12/2014 3:06:00 AM
    I just found myself reading the last line of this poem not knowing how i got is very captivating and scaring at the same time..good work.

  1. Date: 4/4/2014 1:39:00 PM
    This one makes my hair stand on end.

  1. Date: 10/24/2013 5:03:00 PM
    A very dark and sinister, and dramatic poem, Linda! It is fitting, since Halloween is just around the corner! Fantastic work!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments! They mean a lot to me! :) ...I am sending you a soupmail...

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 4:44:00 PM
    I love the poem and want to thank you for a warm greeting I'm only 11 and fairly new to the world of poetry but am already a published poet. Thanks again.

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 6:39:00 PM
    Jeepers! So spooky! :o0 Nice one...

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 3:00:00 AM
    Dear PD many thanks for you many inspiring congratulatory notes at my pages! love..

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 3:55:00 PM
    Yikes, you're all dressed up like Mrs Claus, but where's the "treat"? Hot and spicy cookie happening here PD. Well penned, this 'dramatic dialogue'! Hope your holidays will be happy ones.:) Love, Mikki

  1. Date: 12/6/2012 8:45:00 AM
    Gripping write! I love this kind of poetry, dark and deep. Enjoyed, and when it comes to posting my poems here, I'm afraid I can't share'em all 'cause some of my poems are just too personal and it's best if they are kept on my computer! But I'm really glad you liked everything that I've posted so far and I appreciate all your comments for sure. Have a nice day Linda. -- Sean

  1. Date: 12/4/2012 9:09:00 PM
    ah yes my sweet the words do flow, a laxative weak an maybe slow, could be the end of me, cos i dunno, if the Satans up this creek, or the ghost will take me 4 a freak, cos damnit i wont go! :)

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Wow PD, this is fabulous, it makes me very afraid at what might come, strongly portrayed!

  1. Date: 11/30/2012 6:47:00 PM
    Oookkkkaaaay!! Somehow I missed this one. I love it! Did you read my dramatic verse? It's a little scarey....Thanks for the comments..Love, Holly

  1. Date: 11/23/2012 7:22:00 PM
    Well--thanks for the comment. This is not a serene subject. I am not a fan of being afraid, but sometimes can't help but feel fear. I guess you're saying that once released, there is no going back. Interesting title. If the treat is this bad, I'd hate to know what the trick is.

  1. Date: 11/17/2012 7:26:00 AM
    Can you send a laxative now? Enjoyed your scary write too much, I'm afraid I won't be able to sleep anymore! Great write, PD! Love, Hanitra

  1. Date: 11/14/2012 3:03:00 PM
    hey were you in that contest, PD? the one of Susan's? Hope to see you in more contests!!

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 3:14:00 PM
    Thanks or stopping by to say hi! Wish you the very best and have a wonderful Thanksgiving! Take care! JP

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 11:31:00 PM
    well pd my bff i have been trying for hours most of today to view your poetry list no avail till now ..ron is a persistent guy and i am utterly frustrated with ps being unable to help me out and fix things for me .oh oh .. btw .. a fascinating write luv .. glad it is not the reality for u .. hope i can view another treat of yours before we call 'lights out' bff for life ..

  1. Date: 11/9/2012 2:38:00 PM
    Yup, that is what I need to get back in my head; a lax, the grisly effects of this will keep me on the move for awhile PD. So glad it's a figment of your imagination and not true! Love, Lizzie

  1. Date: 11/6/2012 5:36:00 PM
    The poem draws a real scary picture. A nice presentation -very dramatic. Thanks PD for admiring my Tanka Kiss of Death. You are always very kind. Love. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 4:43:00 AM
    What a lovely belated halloween treat that was. The trick must be a laxatively haunted evening. Enjoyed. Thank you pd.

  1. Date: 11/4/2012 1:45:00 AM
    Hi, my dear sisie! Always salute and thumbs up to all your great masterpieces and work especially the dramatic monologue or dramatic verses (always a tremendous write of yours). I'm trying to identify the difference between dramatic monologue and dramatic verses so I'm spending more time on the soup now going and reading the examples of yours. You know, I'm so interested in this form 'coz I love declamations, speeches and orations when I was a child and younger years, lol. I joined many contests b4 ;))